Story Ideas?

Story Ideas?

I am trying to write a fiction piece... Anyone have any ideas for a good M/F - Fiction Spanking Story. I would love to have you credited for a story idea.

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  1. 1:) A daughter in law is spanked by her well to do parents in law. 2:) a female student attending a patriarchal university pleads with her current boyfriend to marry her before the spanking and date auction, where the unmarried, females are all auctioned off to a list of pre-approved men. The winning man is allowed to spank the female's bare bottom and have the exclusive right to date her during the next college semester. This is done to introduce couples and incentive early marriage and child bearing. The woman should be won by an authoritarian man she wouldn't have choosen as a date. After being spanked she comes to admire and fear him, she should find herself attracted to him but should give her boyfriend the opportunity to be engaged before the next spanking auction, having been declined, she submissively offers herself to the man who won her at the spanking auction, promising as his wife to accept his discipline of her and sex after spankings. 3:) A nanny whose charge snuck out of the house accepts a spanking from a female neighbor who found the child near the road. Despite accepting a humiliating spanking to gain the woman's silence, the nanny's guilty conscience and attraction to her important, unmarried employer causes her to confess and request punishment from the child's father after her bottom has healed. After confessing, she suggests he cane her using the cane on the wall of his study. 4:) A father offers his adult daughter to a male guest who is attending medical training in the area to spank as he knows his daughter fancies him and the male guest will be able to secure a high paying job

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    1. I love the ideas. I am adding them to my idea notes page.

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    2. 5:) Bridesmaid commits a social faux pau. A groomsman confronts her and offers her relief of guilt by accepting a whipping accross her bum with his belt in a quite corner in the cider hut. (Social Faux Pau such as having too much alcohol and throwing up on bride's wedding dress. Sharing a story about the adventure the bride had with her man and how the bride told her she loved him. Her story is corrected causing uncomfortable situation as the adventure with that man wasn't the man she is marrying, but a previous boyfriend. )
      6:) A new owner of a foreclosed, horse ranch, is told there is. Complication as the widow of the late owner is refusing to leave until she talks to him. He finds her in the stables. She tells him her and her husband's plans for the ranch and the breeding pairs they planned for the horses, and how thier still born child is buried beneath a tree on the property. She says she isn't going to leave, and she is willing to serve him as an unpaid worker on the ranch as she must stay there as it is all that is left for her. He tells her it doesn't work like that. She takes a short horse whip from the stable wall and offers it to him saying it can work like that, because when she fails him she will accept him taking a whip to her backside as correction. She expains her husband would use the whip on her for correction or during sex, so she knows it will work and she will follow his instructions. Trying to scare her off, he asks if she would give herself sexually to him if he allowed her to stay. She hesitates before instructing him to whip her bum streniously and after she would be prepared. Intrigued and thinking he can scare her off, he agrees to punish her and orders to disrobe entirely. He punishs her savagedly with her encouragment. With her bare bottom raised, striped from the whip, and bobbing in reaction to the whip, his desires get the best of him and he haistens to take her. At this time she demures submissively pleading for him to agree to marrying her as it was sin to offer herself outside it and she asks he agree to marry her and she will serve him forever like she had her late husband. He agrees to marry her amazed at her cleverness and virtue. He hurriedly takes her sexually cementing thier marriage agreement. Still naked, she walks him into the home saying as she opens the door. "Welcome home, Mr. Callogan."

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    3. A mentor at a patriarchal university trying to comfort a heartbroken senior loans his female mentee he spanks to the heartbroken senior. The mentor recommends spanking and punishing the mentee as though she is his ex-girlfriend who broke up with him when she transferred to another university.

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    4. I am trying to figure out that one. I got a little lost reading it 3 times.

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    5. Sorry, my story idea was long, and my condensing made the idea hard to follow. :)

      The idea is that there is a patriarchal university where female students are assigned a mentor to advise, assist, and spank her when she doesn't follow the rules he gives to her. It is believed by the university that females tend to be influenced towards self destruction when they are without a masiculine authority figure who is responsible to look out for her and discipline her.

      One of these female students is loaned by her mentor to another male student for a week. The idea is that during this week, he will spank and discipline her as though she is his ex-girlfriend. Getting the opportunity to discipline her will help him to move on from the heartbreak and anger he is stuck in.

      One way the story could develop, is that the young woman being spanked should develop sympathy for the man she is loaned to and come to admire him for his strength in spanking her. Also the heartbroken disciplinarian may be relieved and a desire to move on romantically with the young lady he has been spanking, sparked during the spankings and the discussions they have together.

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    6. I like some of this. I do not like the Female student is loaned....
      I do like the fact that a woman going into college is assigned a mentor and he keeps her on the path of graduation on time.

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    7. A female officer worker accidentally sends her male coworker a spanking story she has been writing. The male coworker confronts her a day later. He says that not only had she sent inappropriate content through company servers, she was also writing such content on company time. He says he is inclined to believe she needs to have consequences, but he doesn't want to cause her career any issues. Reminding her about the story he asks if she is of the sincere belief in spanking of females for misdeeds. She admits she is open to idea of corporal discipline for women in some, limited circumstances. He says that he needs to report her, but he wouldn't feel the need if she has already been punished. To ensure her proper punishment he must be the one to give her punishment. He tells her to come to a private conference room after 5 pm. At 5pm he arrives, takes out a wooden paddle from his briefcase and sets it on the table. He then orders her to bare her bottom and bend over the table. She tries to persuade him otherwise, but he reminds her the characters in her spanking story believed spankings are given on the bare bottom and he believed that was her own beliefs and paddling over her skirt wouldn't confirm to herself that she had trully paid by being punished. She reluctantly agrees, but confesses her embarrassment. Seeing no reprieve from him, she bares her bottom and bends over. Her coworker then paddles her bare bottom, lecturing her and commenting about how her bum is taking the paddling and the benefits such a spanking might successfully used to change a female's misbehavior. After paddling her, he warns her that since he now has a paddle they may find she needs it again. It isn't till later when she sits uncomfortably in her car to drive home that she realizes his wooden paddle wasn't new, but scratched and the sealor rubbed partly off incidating it been used before. She relaizes her coworker was pretending not to be a spanko, but is.

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    8. I am glad, Lisa. :)

      Alaska Encounter: Laura, a newcomer to Alaska, joins a local sewing club to ease her social isolation. When the host starts a home daycare, the group needs a new meeting space. The other women fearfully hesitate to approach the local car dealership owner, so they flatter Laura into doing it, praising her beauty and warmth. Laura agrees, eager to win their favor. When she calls, the owner warmly invites her to tour the dealership. In his office, Laura spots a rattan cane in an umbrella jar. As the owner explains how a previous group abused his space making him blunter and more harsh Laura’s eyes keep darting to the cane. Curious, she asks about it. The owner chuckles, replying it is used on housewives who need external motivation to budget for their SUVs. He smoothly returns to business. Eager to break her tension, Laura gives her word that the group will keep the space spotless, and he agrees to let them use it.

      Over the next two months, Laura zealously ensures the room is kept clean, all while secretly fantasizing about the owner using the cane on others and herself. One night, she is rushed and leaves early. The next morning, the owner calls to complain about a mess; he had even stepped on a sewing needle. Laura rushes over, cleans the room, and goes to his office trembling. Though he is willing to forgive the oversight, Laura insists their failure shouldn't be overlooked. She suggests he punish her with the cane since she gave her word. Though surprised and hesitant, he yields to her pleading so she can find relief from her guilt. He warns her it will be a full, serious caning so she doesn't take the discipline lightly. Laura agrees, bares her bottom, and bends over his desk, enduring 12 vicious strokes. Near the end, the owner offers her a deal on a car, hinting that missing a payment would bring severe consequences to her 'lovely' backside rather than her credit score. Being in a new world of pain she doesn't seriously condone it until a day later, as her pain transforms, Laura's imagination continuously replays her punishment.

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    9. Strict and Fair. You should write stories. your descriptions are halfway there

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    10. Thank you, that is very kind. Previously I found my prose bland, but if I relied on AI to write evocative descriptions. Also my mind prefers editing existing words then writing new, so AI could help with that as well. Don't worry about using any of my premises our writing styles are very different, even if starting with the same premise, the resulting stories would be dramatically different from esch other.

      Widow's Guilt: In the raw, numb aftermath of her husband’s sudden death, a young widow is forced to confront the wreckage of her short-lived marriage. Swept up in the influence of a revilvling, feminist friends, she had spent their entire relationship emotionally withholding, despising her husband's affection, and routinely rejecting his pleas for intimacy. Now left with only a heartbreaking letter detailing his longing for her, she is consumed by a crushing guilt. She wonders if God killed her husband in a car crash just to rescue the man from her terrible treatment.

      Desperate for a punishment that matches the depth of her marital failures, she resolves to stop making excuses. She turns to the one person who always saw right through her: her late husband's fiercest defender and close friend. Years prior, this friend had witnessed the couple get into a bitter, public argument; when the husband tried to fix it by kissing his wife afterward, the friend stepped in, publicly declaring that she "needed a thrashing accros her rear much more than a kiss." Terrified of this man but craving his harsh judgment and accountability, the widow seeks him out to ask him to give her a thrashing like he proposed years before ready to subject herself to the wrath of the one person who she knows will not spare her unjustly.

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    11. oh my gosh.... the Widow's Guilt feels wrong. oh my gosh. survivor guilt.

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    12. Guilt relief is one of the benefits that a female gains from being spanked. Females frequently blame themselves for things they shouldn't, and being spanked can cleanse them from that guilt. It is intended to have a happy, romantic ending as her husband's friend is wiser abiut the past then she is stuck at the beginning of the story, but there is a lesson about how we should remember our time on earth with our loved ones is limited and we should love them the best we can.

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    13. Very true Strict and Fair. When I am unraveling hubby knows to take me in hand.

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  2. Here's one. Not sure if it is your cup 'o' tea. :) A woman named Cassidy is attending a local college, tuition paid by her father. He can't afford to pay her rent, but she has not wanted to live at home. She has been living with another girl, Kami, whose father is paying not only her tuition, but for the apartment and other expenses. The two are terrible students, and are just enjoying a hedonistic lifestyle of partying and delinquent behavior. One day, the father of Cassidy's best buddy becomes aware of the goings on. There will be no more bankrolling the chaos. Cassidy has no viable choice but to move back home, which considering her dad can be a drag, could annoyingly cramp her style. From a distance, Cassidy's parents have not kept track of their daughter's progress towards getting her degree. They have only her word and, as you might expect, she has relied on dishonesty to keep them in the dark.

    Once Cassidy has moved in with her parents, she gets settled in and is back to her old ways. She and Kami are brats in arms again, but operating out of their respective childhood homes. What the delinquents don't know is that their fathers have been in touch, and the two men are now aware of the situation. When Cassidy and Kami get arrested after a police raid on a party they were attending, the fathers decide it is time to lay down the law. Neither of the two young women have been disciplined at home since they were much younger, but that is about to change dramatically. Not only will they be getting old-fashioned hairbrush spankings, they will witness each other's profoundly humbling comeuppance.
    (from the twisted mind of E.)

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    1. Twisted Mind of E,
      I actually love the idea. I think I can make that into a story. I have an idea that a cop stops a girl in college and actually is friends with her dad. He calls her and ask the cop to spank her.

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    2. Are you saying the father calls the cop? That sounds interesting. It would make the spanking much more memorable for the girl than if her dad punished her. -E.

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    3. No, the police stops her.... he recognizes her. Knows her father. He calls her father and lets him know that he stopped her and and asked should he give her just a warning. Her father says, "No she needs to learn and to spank her" father says let me talk to her... he tells her that he is disappointed in this whole college situation and that she needs to learn a lesson. she either accepts a spanking from him or she is cut off from all the money.

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    4. I see. I know I might have to wait and read your story to answer the questions I have regarding this situation. I am definitely intrigued. -E.

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  3. A grieving widow retires to the Philippines in order to escape the home that he shared with his treasured, late wife. One day while angerly yelling at the Filipina he has hired to cook and clean for him, he threatens to cane her for her misdeed. She looks at fearfully, continuing to apologize, scruzzies to fix her misdeed. A few days later the Filipina caretaker shly coaxes him into telling her about the domestic discipline relationship he shared with his dear wife. He whistfully explains the benefits of a wife being under her husband's authority to spank and how such a spanking ritual would play out. The Filipina caretaker thinks about what he has shared for a few days, fianlly she coyly and flaggerantly commits the same misdeed, he had threatened to cane her before. She admits she hopes he will spank her like he threatened before. He ponders before sighing and agreeing. As he watches, removes her skirt and panties and folds them. She reminds him he told her spankings are given on the bare. He takes a knife and insturts her to cut switches from the tree in the courtyard as they don't have a cane. She obeys and cuts some switchs. He switches her bare, raised bottom and she expresses remorse and contribution before being sent to the corner.

    Considering herself to be unworthy of being his wife, the Filipina caretaker seeks out a beautiful friend, Henna, who is seeking to marry a wealthy foreigner. The Filipina caretaker invites Henna over to his house, and tells the widower her friend is interested in learning about domestic discipline. She offers the man her wooden hairbrush and requests he paddle her. Smirking he takes the hairbrush and enjoys Henna's expressions as the Filipina caretaker bares herself below the waist. She climbs over his lap and he paddles her bare bum til the olive skin shines with pink and red. At first he holds back as the spanking is not a punishment, but is encouraged to continue by the bouncing bottom over his lap and Henna stares of fearful admiration. 💍⛰️👰

    A suitable ending would be for one of the woman to win in his heart and be married.

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    1. Strict and Fair,
      I love it. that could be a good punishment and romantic story.
      Lisa

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    2. I have a story I wrote back in Feb - email me if you would like to read it. (my email is in the post "How to contact me"

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